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14 Best-Kept Killer Hook Secrets That Grab Your Audience And Hook Them

Rick Braddy — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 05:52:08 +0000

Hook your audience and you can make millions. Fail to find that elusive hook or slant and you’re doomed to mediocrity. Your hook is that critical.

Hooks aren’t just interesting, they’re fascinating and remarkable slants.

These slants resonate with the reader by triggering curiosity and promising a remarkable reader benefit. The forces of a great hook are so strong they’re like a black hole sucking the reader deeper into the copy, even when the reader doesn’t want to read an advertisement, sales letter or story.

Once hooked, the reader must continue reading to satisfy the insatiable curiosity and desire that hooked them in the first place. As ace copywriter John Carlton discusses at length in his Fishing for Hooks article, finding and selecting the right hook is one of the biggest challenges a writer faces.

The hook determines the headline content, the introduction paragraph and extols the primary benefit. Finding the best hook takes time and effort – a LOT of it. The best hooks are simple and brief, hitting the reader like a nail on the head. In marketing, these hooks reflect the Unique Selling Proposition (USP).

These four proven headlines encapsulate the USP and serve as effective hooks for their creators:

Federal Express – “When it absolutely, positively has to be there overnight”

One-Legged Golfer – “Amazing Secret Discovered By One-Legged Golfer Adds 50 Yards To Your Drives, Eliminates Hooks and Slices…And Can Slash Up to 10 Strokes From Your Game Almost Overnight!”

Cosmopolitan Magazine – “50 Ways To Thrill A Man – Warning By #18 He’ll Barely Remember His Name”

4-Hour Workweek - “The 4-Hour Workweek: Escape 9-5, Live Anywhere, and Join the New Rich”

Pick up a copy of National Enquirer (if only you still could), The Globe or the other tabloids and you’ll see firsthand the art of developing storyline hooks and slants at its best (and worst, at the same time). Reporters and editors are professional hook developers. They excel in hooking their readers into picking up their magazines, skimming them and then buying them – by the millions.

So what are some of these best-kept hook “secrets” anyway. Well, actually they’re not secrets at all. Professional writers choose the slants and hooks that will be used for their stories, book titles and articles every single day.

Here they are, excerpts from “The Most Common Slants to Capture Reader Attention“, in “Nonfiction Book Proposals Anyone Can Write“, by Elizabeth Lyon. These are the slants recommended for book writers to develop the best possible book titles – the ones that sell the most book copies.

These slants used to develop hooks for book titles can be used to locate and construct effective hooks on virtually any topic.

Below you’ll find two examples in each category. The first is a published book. The last is an imaginary title as if I was brainstorming for a slant on a book about ‘cats’ (assuming your audience is cat lovers, for example):

1. NEW – what’s never been done before, the cutting edge. Example: New Rules of Marketing and PR, or New Cat Breeds.

2. MONEY - any allusion to the buck attracts attention. Example: Big Profits from Small Stocks, or Million Dollar Cats.

3. SEX – either direct reference or sexual innuendo. Example: Nuts! The Battle of the Bulge, or Furry Bedwarmers: The Cat in Your Life.

4. SECRETS - inside accounts, behind the scenes. Example: Secrets of Fat-Free Baking, or Behind Bars: The Untold Story of Impounded Cats.

5. PROMISES - this slant offers the moon and better deliver. Example: Eat More, Weigh Less, or Cats That Can Change Your Life.

6. FIGHT OR FLIGHT – meant to arouse brain-stem feelings of survival, this slant gets adrenaline rushing. Example: Jungle Rules: How to be a Tiger in Business, or Catting Around: Stalking Big Cat Home Videos.

7. FEAR - when you want to make your reader afraid, use this slant. Example: Warning: The Coming Dark Ages, How to Survive the Collapse of Civilization, or An Endangered Species: Big Cats Fall to Small-Armed Men.

8. NUMBERS – whether the numbers refer to time, pounds, age, or anything else, it’s a classic slant. Example: The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People, or Ten Ideal Vacations for Kittys.

9. LOCATION - an idea that implies a place. Example: In the Kitchen with Rosie, or Bedroom Designs for Catting Around.

10. AMAZEMENT - a slant that gives you a believe-it-or-not feeling or elicits amazement. Example: Remarkable Discoverys! , or The Cat Who Dog-Paddled the Channel.

11. SUPERLATIVES - any title or headline that involves extremes, such as worst, best, longest, shortest, richest, poorest, etc. Example: The Greatest Team of All Time, or The Sleepiest Cats in the World.

12. REVERSALS - minority viewpoints or an opposite stance from the prevailing views on a subject. Example: Roughing It Easy, or Seeing-Eye Cats.

13. TRAVEL – Unlike location, or in addition to it, the travel slant makes clear the out and about orientation of the book. Example: The Cat Who Went to Paris, and His Human, or Cruises Cats Love.

14. HUMOR - a humorous slant on an idea is enough to provide the sharp focus that every subject needs. Example: Chicken Dishes by Nora Drumsticks, Crocodile Dundee by Ali Gator, or I Purr, Therefore I Am.

There’s a tendency to want your headline, title and product to appeal to a broad group of buyers. In reality, these days it’s typically best to narrow your focus so your hook, headline and USP appeal to a more targeted group. This causes your message to resonate and jolt the audience into action.

So, let’s examine the headline examples used in this post.

Post Title: ”14 Best-Kept Killer Hook Secrets That Grab Your Audience and Hook Them”

Slants Used: NUMBER, SUPERLATIVE, SECRETS, PROMISES

Federal Express – “When it absolutely, positively has to be there overnight”

Slants Used: PROMISES, LOCATION

Slants Used: AMAZEMENT, SECRETS, PROMISES, NUMBERS

Cosmopolitan Magazine – “50 Ways To Thrill A Man – Warning By #18 He’ll Barely Remember His Name”

Slants Used: SEX, NUMBERS, AMAZEMENT, HUMOR

4-Hour Workweek - “The 4-Hour Workweek: Escape 9-5, Live Anywhere, and Join the New Rich”

Slants Used: AMAZEMENT, PROMISES, TRAVEL, MONEY, SECRETS

Great hooks are elusive. They’re hidden from plain sight. Like the “one-legged golfer”, which was only uncovered after asking the client how he discovered these new golf techniques that he was selling. He said he was talking to this one-legged golfer, who explained how he discovered how to beat the other players by using his disability to his advantage.

Great hooks are remarkable. They grab the target audience’s interest and demand an answer.

Great hooks are relevant. They encapsulate the primary benefit and speak directly to the reader’s own selfish desires.

Great hooks resonate. They strike a chord within our existing memories and experiences, triggering an emotional response. These hooks tap into stories, memories, beliefs and values that already exist within the reader.

The art of hook-making remains a difficult, yet worthwhile endeavor – for marketers, writers and bloggers. The better the hook, the more fish that will be caught and weighed in each day. The better the hook, the more ReTweets and email forwards a viral message receives. And the more likely word of mouth will spread like a wildfire.

Fortunately, we have many avenues available to quickly and inexpensively test and validate hooks today, including email, Google AdWords ads, Twitter, Facebook and blogs. We can test a hook, slant and headline, measuring the response rates, blog comments, ReTweets and other actions each one causes – then choose the hook and headline that resonates and provides the desired response.

Finding and crafting great hooks requires knowledge of the target audience, some detailed detective work, careful selection of slants – and the courage to stand out and rock your readers’ world.

Tags: audience, blog copywriting, blogging, email copywriting, hook, hooks, slant, slants, story, story-based marketing, storytelling, storytelling in advertising, storytelling in marketing, unique selling proposition, USP
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Story: Struggling organic farmer saves the family farm

Rick Braddy — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 04:00:37 +0000

“Struggling organic farmer saves the family farm and discovers new growth opportunities”

This blog post is quite a bit different than most. In this post, we’re going to explore an actual example of how effective storytelling can be at grabbing a reader’s attention, conveying the benefits of a product by way of example, and stirring emotional interest and desire in a prospect’s mind, leading to more sales from a portion of an audience who is ignoring or increasingly resistant to traditional marketing and advertising methods.

First, let’s take a look at the usual way this “case study” kind of information is used. Have a look at the PDF Case Study, which is typical of case study documents on literally tens of thousands of websites across the Internet. Unfortunately for these companies, this is as far as these cases are ever explored or communicated – an enormous missed opportunity.

Case Study

Next, I would like to share the story of how AgriOrganics Labs products saved their customer’s farm, then helped them grow the farm into a thriving business. Here’s the story:

“Struggling organic farmer saves the family farm and discovers new growth opportunities”

Jimmy Dunn, Jr. awakes before dawn and enjoys a cup of coffee on the front porch, just like his father and grandfather did before him on the family farm, where he’s lived and worked as long as he can remember. However, this day isn’t like any of those other days before. Today, he realizes just how close he is to losing the farm.

Over the years, the family has fought droughts, locusts and even the Great Depression and somehow managed to hold on to the farm – but today things are different. The big farming coalitions are blocking the flow of their produce to the national market, forcing the farm to sell its products locally at a steep discount and lower volume that’s threatening to bankrupt the farm – and his family.

As the sun rises over the hills, Jimmy ponders their options. His wife, Victoria, thinks they should just sell the farm to the coalition and find another way forward. Working this farm is all Jimmy knows and wants in life, and he’s not about to just give up and sell out to the big guys. They’ve faced adversity before and prevailed – there has to be a way.

Jimmy realizes he’s powerless to overcome the stranglehold the coalition has formed against the independents like Sunrise Farms – at least if he continues to play by their rules. He stands up, walks down the stairs onto the front lawn and out of the corner of his eye notices the bag of fertilizer next to the flowerbed. It says “Organic Super-growth Formula”, and claims to be free from chemicals and safe for organic gardens. Their gardener was using it to plant some tulips in the flowerbed around the front porch. Then it hit him.

“Of course,” he said to himself aloud! It just might work. They would convert the farm over to growing and selling organic vegetables. Organic vegetables are fetching a premium price at the markets, and are in extremely high demand, both locally and nationally. How hard could it be to learn organic farming?

Jimmy immediately began the process of switching over to organic farming methods, took out a loan to get the new equipment required, and filed for their organic certification inspection and permit.

Victoria continued to worry, feeling like perhaps they might be going in the wrong direction. What if they couldn’t sell the organic products or something else unexpected happened? The loan they’d taken out was looming over their head like a dark cloud, and money was so tight she’d sold her grandmother’s diamond wedding ring to raise money to pay bills last month. She could feel they were running out of time.

About 3 months later, the farm received its organic certifications and Jimmy began contacting various buyers of organic produce. Their crop wouldn’t be available for a few more months, but experience has shown it’s better to sell as much of the crop ahead of time, if possible. It was tougher going than Jimmy had expected, forging new relationships with buyers they didn’t know, and with a new, unknown organic farm with no track record, there were lots of questions Jimmy wasn’t sure he knew the right answers to when asked.

As Jimmy drove past one of their fields on the way to church one Sunday, he noticed something didn’t look right – the field had a yellowish tint to it. That afternoon, Jimmy drove over to the field to take a closer look. What he discovered made his heart sink – the entire field was infested and the crops were damaged, some beyond recovery.

And from the looks of it, the problem was spreading toward the rest of their main fields. Jimmy knew if he didn’t get this infestation under control fast they could lose the entire crop – and the farm.

Under normal circumstances, they would just dust the crops with the pesticide they’d used for years. In fact, there was enough of it still sitting in the barn to do the job; however, using that pesticide would violate the organic certification they’d worked so hard to earn over the past few months.

When Victoria heard the news, she panicked. “We have to do whatever it takes to save that crop, Jimmy. Besides, who will know? It’s our farm and we can do whatever we must to protect it!” she said.

Jimmy replied, “I’ll know. I’ll know we’ve cheated and that our crop isn’t qualified to be sold as organic – and it’s a violation of state law to claim a crop is certified as organic when it’s not. There has to be another way.”

Their 16-year old daughter, Vanessa, listening to the conversation and seeing how upset and worried both her parents were, decided to see what she could do to help. Unlike her parents, Vanessa is technology-savvy, like most kids today. She quickly goes to Google and researches “organic pesticides” and finds several options.

A very promising company named AgriOrganics Labs claimed they could address most any vegetable crop infestation using their state-of-the-art organic pesticides. And unlike the other options, AgriOrganics Labs offered a free testing service, where you just send them a sample of the plant and infestation, and within 48 hours they’ll ship you the solution. This sounded like what was needed – a quick solution they could count on working the first time, before any more damage was done to the crop.

Vanessa filled out the free testing service request form and printed everything out to show her dad.

He was sitting on the porch, staring out at the dark clouds and lightening of a thunderstorm that was growing closer. She said, “Daddy, I know how worried you are, so I went online and looked around. I found something that looks like it might help our farm.”

Jimmy perked up out of his near depression state, and said, “What’s that, Honeybee?” Honeybee is Vanessa’s nickname that her dad has called her since she was just a little girl, working her little honey farm out back.

“I found a company that makes organic pesticides and guarantees they can get us a solution to our problem in 48 hours or less,” she said, handing the printed papers to him. “All we have to do is send them some samples and they’ll ship us what we need to get rid of those caterpillars and beetles. And they’re certified for use in organic farming – that’s what we need, right?”

Jimmy pulled his glasses out of his shirt pocket and put them on, studying the material more closely now. Then he smiled and said, “This looks like just what the doctor ordered, Honeybee. I’ll give ‘em a call first thing tomorrow. Thanks darling“, reaching out and giving her a big hug and a peck on the cheek.

The next morning, Jimmy called the toll-free 800 number and spoke with a very nice person, who explained exactly what they needed in order to run their tests. Given the presence of caterpillars and beetles, the man was very certain they could address the infestation with one of their best-selling organic pesticides.

The AgriOrganics Labs organic pesticide was about three times as expensive as the usual pesticides they had been using, but well worth the price if it worked as advertised. Jimmy quickly visited the infested field, gathered the samples, and placed them in a small box that he then sent overnight to the AgriOrganics Labs folks.

Sure enough, 2 days later, Victoria came outside and said that the lab people were on the phone. They told Jimmy they had exactly what’s needed to treat the infested field as well as the rest of the farm to prevent further spread and damage – a product they called “Formula 5™”. They also said that Formula 5 would protect the farm against 73 other potential pests, and would last about 6 months between treatments.

Jimmy placed his order over the phone on the spot, not wanting to waste another minute. Fortunately, AgriOrganics Labs has a distribution center just 75 miles north of the farm, so they could deliver and apply Formula 5 within just a few days.

Jimmy was happy to pay the nominal delivery and application service charge to have it all taken care of for him at this point, and to ensure the product was applied properly by the experts this time.

The AgriOrganics Labs team called and set an appointment to arrive on Friday morning, and said they planned to work through the weekend to get the job done. Jimmy was impressed by how professional they looked, wearing their white lab coat uniforms.

This was definitely different from anything else he’d ever seen. He was grateful that they weren’t wasting any precious time and were willing to work through their weekend to take care of everything. He just hoped and prayed that it wasn’t too late…

Jimmy watched them prepare their equipment and go to work. They applied the Formula 5 using a “fog” delivery system. They used the wind to help distribute the Formula 5 across the fields. It took only about a day to treat the entire farm. They came back and repeated the same treatment two more times over the weekend.

Then Sunday afternoon, they came by the house and said they were finished, and that their early testing results showed the infestation was cured. They asked Jimmy to accompany them to inspect the fields. As promised, there was no sign of any caterpillars or beetles. Jimmy thanked them and they took off their white lab coats, climbed into their truck, and drove away down the gravel road.

Victoria brought out a tray with plastic glasses and a pitcher of iced tea, and they sat on the porch together, watching the sunset. Victoria said, “Well, they sure were very nice people. Do you think the crops will be OK now?”

Jimmy said, “Yep. That Formula 5 product of theirs worked better than anything I’ve ever seen – heck, better than anything I’ve ever heard of. I’m going to tell Jed and Barry about this stuff, since their farms are also showing signs of those same critters now.”

About then, Vanessa drove up in her white Mustang convertible, and parked on the grass where she usually does. Jimmy said, “You realize our little Honeybee saved the farm, don’t you?” Vanessa said, “Yeah. Let’s go into town and celebrate with a nice dinner at that fancy new restaurant, Jimmy.” Jimmy replied, “You betcha. We definitely have a lot to be thankful for and celebrate today. Let’s go.”

The following week, the phone rang again. It was the AgriOrganics Labs people following up to make sure everything was alight. Jimmy explained how there was still no sign of those “pesky critters” (as he called them), and gave them the names and phone numbers of his nearby farmer friends, who were also in need of Formula 5™, since the traditional pesticides they’d tried didn’t seem to be working very well on the beetles for some reason.

For just a moment, Jimmy reflected how they’d been tempted to by-pass the organic farming rules and use conventional pesticides just a few weeks earlier. In retrospect, that could have cost them the farm, since these particular beetles were not responding to traditional pesticide treatment.

Then the AgriOrganics Labs representative asked Jimmy something unexpected. She said, “We noticed you’re growing organic tomatoes, corn and squash. What if your organic vegetables grew up to 50% bigger and faster – would that be of interest to you?”

Jimmy said, “Yeah, sure. Why do you ask?” She went on to tell a story about an organic vegetable farmer who doubled his profits last year using their new OrganiGrow™ fertilizer product. She said it was one of the best-kept secrets in their industry, and it came with a money-back guarantee, like all AgriOgranics Labs products.

Jimmy thought about it a moment. He realized they had lost nearly half of that first field before curing the infestation, and could really use some kind of boost to recover fully. She said they were even able to provide the product on credit, since they believed in it so strongly and knew it was a great investment for his farm.

Jimmy said, “Well, if it works as well as Formula 5 did, I’d be a fool not to try it!” This time, Jimmy was able to apply the fertilizer himself in a couple of day’s time using his regular equipment.

They were only a couple of months away from the harvest now, and the future was already looking brighter to Jimmy. Even Victoria seemed to believe they were going to make it through these tough times.

A few months later, the harvest went smoothly and they found several buyers, but only sold about half of the crop. The tomatoes were the biggest, most beautiful Jimmy had ever grown at their farm. Jed asked him what kind of “steroids” he was using on them! Jimmy just smiled, realizing the AgrilOrganics Labs folks really saved his farm.

The next day the doorbell rang. A man introduced himself as a representative for a national grocery chain supplier. After a good discussion and a few glasses of iced tea, the man placed an order for their entire remaining crop, at a price that was 25% higher than market prices.

Jimmy signed a contract to sell their next three years crops, all they could grow, to this one national distributor. The man mentioned repeatedly that the demand for organic vegetables was doubling every year, and it was tougher than ever to find top-quality organic produce like Sunrise Farms’ was selling.

After the man left, Vanessa said, “Daddy, I saw the Bruner’s are trying to lease their fields – maybe we could expand our farm by using their land and help Mrs. Bruner out.” Mr. Bruner had passed away that summer, there was nobody to run the farm for them, and Mrs. Bruner was now struggling financially.

“That’s a brilliant idea, Honeybee!” I’ll give Mrs. Bruner a call and see what she’s asking for a lease.

That was two years ago. Today, Sunrise Farms continues to grow and expand – along with AgriOrganics Labs, who continue to supply Sunrise Farms with its premium quality organic fertilizers and pesticides.

Learn more about how to use powerful storytelling techniques in your marketing mix…

Discover how easy it is to create powerful stories that reach a part of your audience who will very likely continue to ignore you… until you do.

Note: This story is fictional, serving as an example of how to use storytelling in marketing. Any relationship to actual companies, places, people or things are completely coincidental. No beetles or caterpillars were harmed in the making of this story.

See the difference? It’s like night and day… especially to a customer!

Customers are much more interested in stories about other customers who are like them than they are in your (or anyone else’s) product. That’s why case studies need to be turned into compelling stories – and these stories need to be promoted as low-key, high-powered campaigns that boosts your sales.

These stories are everywhere around us, just waiting to be told.

These story-based techniques are responsible for generating millions of dollars in sales in a matter of days… (in the Internet Marketing arena). They work anywhere human beings are involved (which is still around 100% of any market, at least until “V” really shows up!)

That’s why we created “The Precision Marketing System” – to provide our customers with a way to unleash the untold power of these stories.

What kind of stories do you have to tell?

Next steps: Watch this video

Tags: case study, case study template, story, story marketing, story-based marketing, storytelling, storytelling in marketing
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Creative storytelling – A savvy marketer’s competitive edge

Rick Braddy — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 04:04:11 +0000

Earlier in 2008, I wrote about the power of storytelling in permission marketing and how these techniques had enabled me to:

Generate more than ten times as much interaction and comments posted to one of my blogs
Triple our new sales during the month I ran a single story-based campaign to my lists
Double new sales during an entire quarter this same story ran on our websites and auto-responder

I think I giggled like a little girl when I saw all those blog posts coming in the first time! And I remember we celebrated tripling our sales with that first story-based campaign. I know there was alcohol involved, I just don’t remember what kind or how much

Anyway, these great results caused me to dig deeper into how and why storytelling worked so well, and how to use the power of storytelling most effectively in all kinds of campaigns.

In the process, I discovered that certain neuro-linguistic programming (NLP) techniques can be combined with storytelling to do what I’ll call “amplifying” the impact a story has on the reader – which stirs the deep emotional responses needed to get people to stop what they’re doing and take action; e.g., read and post comments on blogs and buy products online.

At first this NLP stuff seemed like hocus pocus or something. I remember when I told one of my PhD friends (who now leads usability research at Microsoft) what we were doing… He said:

“Storytelling and NLP, eh? Throw in some herbal healing, drums and rattles and you have the basic formula for shamanic ritual — that’s been in demand among homo sapiens for millions of years… should be a winner!”

Well, this kind of reaction to NLP seems to be fairly common. I suppose NLP has both positive and negative connotations on the surface. Nevertheless, storytelling certainly HAS been used by humans as long as we’ve been on this Earth – and probably will continue to be.

And NLP simply provides us with a proven methodology for anchoring our product’s benefits, key features, etc. into the story and tickling some key emotional responses (sorry – no hocus pocus here).

Interestingly, while discussing this with some top marketers at a major online software business recently, I learned how they’re beginning to incorporate NLP in their telemarketing efforts (in particular, “embedded commands”). It’s becoming clear that a number of “advanced marketers” are quietly using NLP increasingly in their marketing and sales motion, for one simple reason - because it works.

Anyway, these early successes led me to hook up with my long-time friend and former collegue, Jeff Sulma, an accomplished copywriter and screen play author (screen plays are basically stories), to learn as much as I could about these techniques. I wanted to have an expert on storytelling on board to supplement my own capabilities in this core area.

Jeff introduced me to the standard techniques that Hollywood writers have used in crafting their stories for decades – proven story “models” and methods used to create blockbuster movies, shows and the like (I had no idea this stuff even existed – but it makes sense now that I’ve seen it).

This isn’t “rocket science”, but there are definitely some best practices and formulas that are proven to work and that should be used to generate above average results and to ensure your stories remain interesting and achieve their intended results.

So, why do stories work in our marketing?

Foremost, because they’re more interesting than other methods of communicating.

I think most people are “bored to tears’ by the majority of advertising and marketing we’re exposed to. Let’s face it. It’s hard to get passionate about many of these products, too!

But when you discuss how a product affects someone’s life, by way of a story, it’s now much more interesting. Stories bring the “human element” of real life into focus, enabling us to “bond” with the character in the story, often without even realizing it.

Because stories are much more interesting than most advertisements, product web pages, data sheets, case studies and the like, they capture people’s attention and draw them in – into becoming “consumers” of the information.

And once a person becomes an information consumer of the story, they’re probably ”hooked”. And in this age of information hyper-overload we live in today, that’s half the battle – getting people to give you a few minutes of their precious time and actually “listen” for a change.

A-I-D-A

AIDA is an acronym that stands for Attention-Interest-Desire-Action, a process we marketers go through to grab a prospect’s attention, build interest and desire for what we’re selling, then trigger the prospect to take action (e.g., opt-in on our landing page, click through to read our offer, click the Add To Cart button, etc.)

Stories begin by grabbing the prospect’s “Attention“, as described above. Next, when properly crafted they create “Interest” and drive a curisoity to know more (e.g., to know how the story turns out). Next, stories can actually build “Desire” for your product within the mind of your prospect; e.g., they see the benefits the character in the story is getting from your product – and they begin to want those same benefits.

Stories “frame” the opportunity our product represents within the mind of our reader (prospect), and can be used to stimulate the prospect to take “Action” – to buy a product, to subscribe to your list, etc.

A Product Is Born

It didn’t take long for Jeff and me to realize that we were onto something big here. I mean, a formula that enables marketers to break through the spam, market noise, sales resistance and advertising fatigue we’re all suffering from today… and get people to Listen and Buy…

I quickly recognize a product opportunity when I see one, and this one didn’t take a genius to figure out! In fact, as I recall, Jeff and I were on a fishing trip this past summer at my lake house, discussing the amazing results these campaigns were achieving when we realized – we should package this stuff up and make it available for other businesses and marketers to use!

With my Web marketing and corporate marketing background, coupled with Jeff’s copywriting and storytelling knowledge, we turned all of this knowledge and experience into a simple “system”, or methodology, for marketers to use in creating these powerful story-based campaigns.

Jeff was insistent that we make the system dead-stick simple – easy enough for anyone to put to use in their business quickly. So that’s what we did…

We now call this product “The Precision Marketing System”. The product contains virtually everything (that matters) that we know and have learned about developing story-based marketing campaigns that get results. The product is for anyone who’s responsible for developing marketing campaigns, writing copy, or developing ads – for email marketing campaigns, direct mail, and more traditional ads.

What’s really interesting about all this is we actually discovered something unexpected. Stories “break through” the noise and apathy level in the marketplace and get a marketer’s messaging both heard and consumed – certainly something nobody else is claiming today!

Assuming you have a meaningful message and a product that resonates with your target audience, this precision marketing system enables this “tuned out” audience to be reached and sold – it’s that simple, when you follow the step-by-step instructions and “playbook” we created.

There’s also a 2 hour overview video that explains everything and takes you through exactly how to apply these techniques in your business.

Pretty cool! This was a fun product to develop, and it’s also turning out to be a lot of fun helping people learn it and apply it in their businesses. I’m certainly looking forward to 2009!!

Read the rest of the Precision Marketing story here to get more details…

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The Power of Story in Permission-based Marketing

Rick Braddy — Tue, 05 Aug 2008 19:06:52 +0000

A few months ago, I began using more stories in my communications with my subscribers and customers. As it turns out, stories are an incredibly powerful way to communicate – especially in today’s age of marketing communications saturation, where everyone is so fatigued by the constant bombardment of ads we’re exposed to daily.

So, I decided to try a few story-based campaigns – tests designed to find out for certain just how well this story-based approach works. In short, the results were truly remarkable in one of my niche businesses (an online training and membership club site).

I had been emailing my subscriber list of around 25,000 regularly for years (a list that steadily grows), but that I’d noticed had become less and less responsive over the last 12 months or so. I thought at first there might be an email deliverability issue, due to spam filters, for example. It turns out that is a part of the issue, but not the biggest issue.

The biggest issue was in how I was communicating with this audience. In short, they were simply “bored”. Tired of the same old dry offers, advertisements, free giveaway promotions, and regular communications like newsletters – what a good friend of mine calls “SOS” (same old sh**).

He says that most of today’s communications ends up in the SOS bucket in people’s mind – they quickly recognize the form factor of the email, landing page and/or sales page as an advertisement or a cleverly disguised promotion designed to sell them something. I think I agree with that assessment. The old models are just that – old, boring and less effective in this era of permission-based marketing.

Today, people are hungry for content – content that’s interesting and useful for them – that meets their own selfish desires as consumers of content. Yet as marketers, we have our own selfish needs – to promote our products and services.

So, how can we get our message through these increasingly sophisticated “filters” that our prospects and customers have erected to protect their time from being constantly invaded and to avoid being sold?

Short Answer: Story.

Stories provide the “envelope” within which we can deliver our messages – an envelope that will actually get opened, read, understood, remembered, repeated by word of mouth and acted upon.

Not just any stories, but stories that are interesting, that provide context for our products, but without hard or soft-selling.

Relevant stories about customer successes (not dry “case studies”). Personal stories about what we’ve been through that they can use to relate to us as fellow human beings. Stories of our biggest triumphs – and our biggest failures and lessons learned.

Stories make use human to our readers (as do typos). And people will make time to listen to a good story! Stories help to build trust with our readers. And properly-crafted stories build a lasting relationship – one that creates enough interest and desire to cause our reader to actually listen to us (for a change).

The key is in how we carefully weave our marketing messages into these stories so they get consumed by our readers – while our readers are in a receptive frame of mind.

So, back to my story here…

I sent an email to my subscribers, telling the story of one of our members who had been losing a lot and was extremely frustrated. This story took the readers through the emotions this member was experiencing, and created empathy and understanding. Then the story shared the solution – how this member managed to overcome what had seemed like insurmountable obstacles (prior to joining our membership site).

The support this member received from other members on our site, via our private forums, as well as some personal assistance by one of our coaches, who reached out and helped this member directly, was the key to his turnaround.

At the end of this story, our member had gone from losing thousands of dollars a month to paying off credit card debt and generating thousands of dollars in profits – in just 6 weeks. In fact, this member was so successful, he actually quit his job to pursue his dream of working from home.

As soon as I published a couple of these stories, three things happened:

1. Our blog started getting comments – people were now interested enough to get involved, and THEY became a part of the story themselves. This provided these readers with an outlet – a way to be heard, to share their feelings and points of view. Prior to this story, the blog had rarely garnered any participation by its readers (who were obviously bored to tears with my ramblings before that).

2. Our private membership site forums became more active – our members became more passionate, engaged, starting talking more about the site, and referring more of their friends to join us.

3. Sales started pouring in. Our new sales during the month we sent just 2 of these email stories to our subscribers actually tripled. Let me say that again. We TRIPLED our sales – by sending 2 stories to our subscribers over a 2 week period!

Over that quarter, that same story resulted in doubling our sales for the entire quarter.

Now, there’s an art to crafting these stories so they have the desired effect, and combining the power of the stories with social media to enable the interactive environment that creates the “social proof” – one of the by-products that results in rapid increased sales results.

Story-telling in our marketing is something that companies need to do more of. Our listeners, prospects and customers are tired of the SOS communications style we’re using with them.

I have done enough experiments with this story-based methodology to say for certain that it really does work – and it works surprisingly well, too.

I wish I could take full credit for having come up with this technique of using stories to take our prospects on what I now call a “magic carpet ride” – a magic carpet that’s powered by the stories we use to ensure our messages get through and have a real impact.

I learned to incorporate stories into my marketing from Frank Kern – a brilliant Internet marketer who’s probably best known for having sold over $23 million of product in less than 24 hours on 3 launches where he wrote the copy (using storytellig techniques).

Besides being extremely funny and entertaining, Frank’s approach to story-telling absolutely rocks – and it gets amazing results. He calls these techniques “Mass Control” (a course that’s now sold out).

I attended Frank’s Mass Control seminar in San Diego a few months ago (along with 600 others), where I learned even more about his approach to story-telling and other powerful online marketing techniques, which I tried as discussed above – which turned into immediate, amazing results.

Since then, I’ve been learning a lot more about the key underpinnings responsible for these methods’ success – a combination of story-telling, relationship-building, trust and some aspects of NLP.

This is an area you’ll be hearing more about, as I continue to refine these powerful techniques and share my findings. I’m doing a number of experiments to refine these techniques into a methodology that I can share with others.

The power of story in marketing provides us with access to an additional “segment” of our market that rejects traditional advertising and promotions – a part of the market we can readily tap into by expanding our marketing to include more use of relevant stories. Creative storytelling is certainly an approach to copywriting that provides many advantages.

Finally, the reason stories work so well is that it “frames” the decision-making processes within our prospects mind – setting up a framework for that decision-making that enables us to influence how facts are interpreted and how decisions are made – “implicitly” instead of explicitly.

Explicit decisions are what traditional advertising attempts to do – to “sell you” into submission through repeated exposures, compelling copy, impressive claims, strong benefit statements, great offers and solid calls to action. While these traditional methods certainly have their place, it’s increasingly difficult to use these traditional approaches as the “starting point” for campaigns - or we risk falling into the SOS bucket.

Implicit decisions happen when we’ve shared a few stories with our prospect, and she decides for herself that she wants to take action. She makes her own decision to take action, without the need for prodding, cajoling or hard-selling tactics. And once she makes this decision, she’s much more passionate and active than if we’d pushed her into taking action *we* wanted or requested directly.

Incidentally, If this success story sounds interesting and like something you or your company could benefit from learning to incorporate into your marketing campaigns, contact me and let’s discuss how to craft a story-based campaign for your business.

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I hope you find the power of story as interesting and useful as I have in my marketing. Until next time, all the best in your online business efforts.

Here’s another interesting perspective on why certain email communications is interesting to us and our readers. And a great Top 10 truths in branded story-telling article.

To great story-telling,

Rick

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